Demo AD

[Tim Drake]

Here it is, I tried YouTube, but they bes no0bs, so I went to daliymotion and up loaded the demo vid there, and now here it is, in link form!

heres the link: www.dailymotion.com/video/xb1gqj_titan-tempest-video-ad-demo_videogames

[Lillith Tiller]

A few things:

-I think you should cut the beginning short. Everyone that would be interested has seen the theme a million times. You could have it start, but a few pics, but then have the picture explode or something, the happy music replaced with something dark, and so on.
-Some of the words are hard to read
-It might be better if you explained what the original characters we have do, too.'
-The hope thing was a bit odd at the end...

[Tim Drake]

thanks for the comments Shiro, I hope everyone leaves some ideas and comments here for the vid.

however I just gotta point out, that this was more about me showing some of my editing skills, and that I did this video in under 2 hours, and spent just over 2 hours on it total as far as transitions text and publishing.


The final product will have edited pictures, of the Teen Titans, old, new, cannon and OCC, as well as villains, and neutrals with a little more of the plot/backstory at the beginning, and tags for the OCCS so ppl will have an idea coming into it who's who.


I'd also like to note that we had 50 visitors yesterday, now Im not saying it was all my doing, but I do think that this could be a GREAT was to drum up some traffic, if done again, and done RIGHT.


But that's partly hinging on the input I get from everyone here.

[Violet Schultz]

- I agree with Shiro. In fact, I might even go so far as to say that the beginning theme is unneeded. We need to emphasize what is unique about our site, and that theme is pretty standard.

- I would change the font to something that looks a little more professional. Maybe try Cambria or Goudy Old Style. They are unique, but they still look semi-official. Avoid Arial and Papyrus at all costs!

- I noticed a few typos.

- Since Slade and Trigon are both major villains here, I would include something about Trigon as well.

- I LOVE the music choices!